Merry Christmas and Happy new years.
We wish you a Merry Christmas, we wish you a Merry Christmas, we wish you a Merry Christmas and a
happy new year.
happy new year.
Happy birthday Jesus <3
Walt: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.
1. Introduction
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Orientates and hooks
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2. Body Paragraph 1
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Mr Goodwin told us instructions, he said we were going to the zoo, but it was a digital tour of the San Diego zoo.
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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Which animals I watched - What I learnt - Animal 1
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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Which animals I watched - What I learnt - Animal 2
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the San Diego Zoo
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In the morning our teacher showed us a clip on YouTube, it was called the Fear Factor. It is the most disgusting most revolting video we have ever watched because, they had to eat and drink… Bugs, worms and they had to drink blood and they had to eat rat hair chips, YUCK!! After that revolting video Mr Goodwin said,“ Now it’s time for the room 6 Fear Factor” I couldn’t wait to start.
1. Introduction
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Orientates and hooks
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2. Body Paragraph 1
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Introducing the fear factor challenge. Watching video- What the video was about and how we felt when we watched it.
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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(Disappointed I wasn't picked + why I wanted to be picked)
I was disappointed I wasn’t picked Reason I wanted to picked was because it sounded fun and interesting.
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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Contestants and what they were eating also Just another one of Mr Goodwin’s tricks
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the fear factor challenge
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After buying some products, I went straight back to my group and we started making more and selling more products. It was really fun selling and making stuff especially when they came out good.As people were coming to buy our products, we were kinda sorta running out of bracelets and we weren't fast enough, the only things we had left were some rings, I was panicking. I tried my best to make some more but by that time the market was over we packed up started to clean and we went into the team 4 area. It was pretty fun.
The thing that they should improve is well . . . nothing. Because it is just perfect nothing should be changed, it is like a beauty that came down from, chocolate heaven. So yeah not a thing in that heavenly jaffas chocolate should be changed at all.